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How to Dramatically Improve Your Fiction Manuscript & Revise Like a Pro!


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It all takes place Thursday, May 5 at 10:00 AM Pacific Time, 1 PM Eastern (with a replay available the same day)
Here’s the link to join the class (don’t worry, we’ll send this info again before the webinar):


Now, up for a little fun?

We have a very brief practice manuscript for you to download, so you can test your current revising skills against Manuscript Magic.


Try to identify as many unique problems as you can. There are just two rules:

1. You have to be able to name the problem. “This is telling, not showing” is good. “There’s just something wrong with this sentence” isn’t.


2. Only keep count of unique problems, not individual instances. So, for example, if there are 3 instances of “showing, not telling”, that only counts as one unique problem.
Tally up the unique problems you can name and, during the class, you’ll be able to compare it to how many unique problems Manuscript Magic identified!
Download the practice manuscript here (for length purposes, it’s a children’s picture book. But remember, Manuscript Magic works on *all* kinds of fiction):


See you on the 5th!
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